About beginnings and endings

THE END OF SOMETHING by Sara Etgen-Baker

In a village called Aerendyl there once lived an inexperienced but talented elfin scribe named Lessien Nénharma.  Now it happened one day that Lessien came upon an email message from an editor at one of the major scribal presses. 

With bated breath, Lessien opened the email. 

“Dearest Scribe:  I’ve received your synopsis and the first two chapters of your novel.  Although your scribings and story line show great promise, your characters are flat and lack humanity.  Your subplots are intriguing but seem disconnected from the major plot.  The narrative arc is weak, and your story has no clear ending.  So, I can’t accept your manuscript at this time. Sincerely, Amroth Súron, Senior Editor Drannor Press”

Lessien threw down her scribal quill and Skyped her instructor, Lady Telemmaitë.

“Lady Telemmaitë, whatever am I to do?”  Lessien fought back the tears.  “Tell me.  Is this the end of my scribal career?”

“No, my fellow scribe.  Rejection doesn’t mark the end of your career.  Rather, rejection heralds a new beginning.”

“You speak in riddles, Lady Telemmaitë.  I don’t understand!”

“Tis quite simple, my accomplished apprentice.  Toss out your old manuscript.”  Lady Telemmaitë leaned forward.  “This time begin with the ending in mind.” 

“So I focus on how the plot ends, right?”

“No, scribe, no!  Focus on your characters; for your characters, their motives, and their development drive their actions and set the plot in motion—not the other way around.  Begin with where they will end up.”

“I understand, Lady Telemmaitë, but I feel so overwhelmed and am afraid to begin again.”

“Begin one chapter at a time.  Its end will determine the next one’s beginning.”  Lady Telemmaitë smiled.  “Take heart.  Chapters begin and end, but fear thee not thine own endings, for they are but beginnings in disguise.  Now grab thy quill and begin your next chapter!”

Sara Etgen-Baker is learning to embrace the beginnings and endings in her own life.