Sunday, March 9, 2014

Dillehay Crossing--Chapter 1

Just wanted to share the initial chapter of my novel, Dillehay Crossing.  The chapter is still rough in places, but I'm falling in love with the characters and the premise behind the novel.  I'm only sharing part of Chapter 1 right now...to keep you reading.  Enjoy!

DILLEHAY CROSSING
Chapter 1 
            Abi donned her running clothes, laced up her running shoes, and rushed downstairs.  The lavender early morning lit her way as she approached the gravel trails that meandered along the creek’s edge.  At first her stride was short and her pace slow; but as her heart pounded harder, the blood in her body heated, and her tight muscles loosened.  Abi lengthened her stride and quickened her pace.  Beads of sweat trickled down her forehead, stung her eyes, and blurred her vision.  So, when the trail turned sharply, Abi didn’t see the broken tree branches in front of her. 

She stumbled and landed face first in some underbrush.   She stood up, wiped the dirt and sweat from her face, and caught a glimpse of something just around the bend.   What are those old structures off in the distance?  I don’t think I’ve ever seen them before.  She shook off her fall and resumed her run, curiosity and adrenalin surging through her body.  Abi ran across a narrow, shallow bend at Dillehay Crossing where an old dilapidated ranch house, Texas wind wheel, and crumbling red barn came into view. 

  She approached the property and ventured inside the decrepit red barn.  She ran her fingers over a rusty, turn-of-the-century tractor.  Who once lived in this ranch house and drove this old tractor?  Abi strolled up the dirt and gravel walkway that led toward the discolored, broken-down ranch house.  The crumbling and sagging structure beckoned her inside; so, she crept up the rickety steps onto the front porch.  Using her shoulder, Abi shoved open the front door and found that—although the wooden house was decaying—the floors were not rotten and actually looked sturdy enough to bear her weight.

She entered the house, turned right, and discovered the parlor had a fireplace with an adjoining kitchen and an antiquated four-hole wood cook stove.  Abi picked up the empty cast iron cooking pot from the stove and pretended to stir its contents.  How long have you been waiting for the woman of the house to return? 

Abi retraced her steps then made an immediate left toward the stairs.  At the base of the steps, Abi saw her—the cloudy figure of a woman.  Abi’s eyes traveled up looking for some semblance of a face, but smoke—gray smoke—filled in the places where the woman’s nose, mouth, and eyes were supposed to be.  The woman turned and floated up the stairs, the morning light passing through her like sunlight through smoke.  Abi followed her.  Did the woman know Abi was there?   

At the top of the stairs, the woman disappeared as she faded through one of the bedroom doors.  A young woman’s frantic voice begged from behind the wall.  “Hurry!  Fetch the doctor right away!  Something’s terribly wrong!”  The woman’s voice made Abi’s skin crawl and the hairs on her neck bristle.

She jumped back, reversed her course, and scurried back through the house.    Once outside, Abi retraced her steps and ran back down the dirt and gravel road.  She raced across the shallow end of Dillehay Crossing and ran along the creek’s edge until her own front porch was in sight.  She stopped and caught her breath.  Questions whirled through her mind.  Who was the woman I saw?  Whose voice did I hear?  Just who were the ranchers who had once cared for the livestock and land on the other side of Dillehay Crossing?  Were they in any way related to her husband and the Mason family?  Why did they leave?  Hmmm.  I’ll have to ask Howie.  Will he believe me if I tell him about the woman I saw.  Well, maybe I shouldn’t tell him about her just yet.  To be continued......

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